Thursday, October 16, 2014

October 20, 2014


Bellringer:  Towards the end of chapter 9, Winston reflects that he now knows how human inequality had been maintained, but he still does not understand the motives for maintaining inequality: "why should human equality be averted?" (216).  

Why do you think that The Party - and ruling classes in past ages - have made an effort to maintain inequality?

Activity 1: Chapter 10 hand out and discussion

Homework: Read through page 239 (Part 3, chapter 1).

Share your journal entries on war, social hierarchy, and the economy in 1984 

  • Either read them aloud or paraphrase them with sufficient detail and textual evidence to give groupmates a full picture of your insights, logic and evidence 
  • Clearly and try to project so groupmates can here you; don't mumble.  Listen actively and then comment and ask questions of each person
When you are finished sharing...
  • Take out a sheet of paper and put all of your names on it, today's date, and the period.

  • Each group should come to a consensus about the three most important points in the chapter so far.

  • Write each key point down along with a piece of textual evidence/ a quote to support each point

  • Finally, discuss and write down one connection between the issues raised in this chapter and the world today.



Army document providing evidence of chemical weapons in Iraq from 2003-2011

Army FOIA documentation of chemical weapons in Iraq from 2003-2011



Report on US helping Iraq during 1988 chemical/biological attack on Iran



Video news report on Army documents proving US found chemical weapons in Iraq from 2003-2011; however, they did not find active chemical weapons plants, just stores of old weapons built in part with US and European assistance 




Ms. Gutierrez made this, but we’re also going to use it because it’s good and she was nice enough to share it!
How does Orwell set up a series of contrasts/opposing ideas, sometimes within the same sentence and for what larger purpose, to what end, for what thematic point? Write one good, hefty paragraph. Due in 15 minutes.
Reminders:
Diction: word choice
Syntax: arrangement of words
Juxtaposition: placement of two things closely together to emphasize similarities or differences
Oxymoron: paradoxical juxtaposition of words that seem to contradict one another
Connotation: Meanings or associations that readers have beyond its dictionary definition
Personification: lifelike qualities given to an inanimate object
Example:
“The bluebells were so thick underfoot that it was impossible not to tread on them. He knelt down and began picking some, partly to pass the time away, but also from a vague idea that he would like to have a bunch of flowers to offer to the girl when they met. He had got together a big bunch and was smelling their faint sickly scent when a sound at his back froze him, the unmistakable crackle of a foot on twigs. He went on picking bluebells. It was the best thing to do. It might be the girl, or he might have been followed after all. To look around was to show guilt” (118).
My Paragraph: In this passage Orwell contrasts the innocence and optimism of bluebell picking with the harsher reality that is Winston’s life: if he is caught he could be vaporized, killed, tortured. The juxtaposition of “bluebells” which were “thick underfoot” with the more frightening sound of an “unmistakable crackle of a foot on twigs” is Orwell’s way of using language to show that the innocence of lovers meeting, of sharing time together, of being alone, of a man making the independent thought of gathering lovely flowers for a woman who has professed her love for him is saddled up against the panic and terror of the being followed, of being seen. In Orwell’s new world, the telescreen dominates, and Big Brother sees all; Winston thinks, “he might have been followed after all” and yet in this moment, Winston continues doing this rebellious act, and “picked another and another.” The simplicity and beauty of picking flowers for a woman is contrasted with the horror of a world where love, solitude and sexual pleasures are outlawed. 

Note that I use parallel structure, repetition, integration of short quotes and most importantly, I discuss the ways in which Orwell uses contrasting images to get at a larger thematic idea! It’s not enough to just note the devices writers use…you have to begin to use language yourself in more complex ways. If I showed you a yoga video and asked you only to note the yoga positions and never asked you to get on a mat and try them yourself, it would be an empty exercise. Get on the mat and try the positions! Child’s Pose.  There’s also so much more I didn’t cover in the passage. I might discuss the “faint sickly scent.” Why “sickly”? Is this a contrast too? I might look at the word “froze” as a contrast to his kneeling down. These are two completely different gestures. Wouldn’t you rather kneel down and pick bluebells for a love interest than have your back freeze in terror? Yes. Me too.

Wednesday, October 15, 2014

October 15 & 16, 2014



us-casualties-of-iraq-chemical-weapons.html

What does the geopolitical map look like in the world of 1984?

HW: Journal Entry: War, Social Hierarchy, and the economy in 1984   According to "the book" in 1984, what is the purpose of war in relationsto maintaining a social/economic hierarchy? (one page - incorporate quotes)

Read and annotate pages 193-200

Digital Nation


http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/pages/frontline/digitalnation/view/



The United States of Secrets

Pentagon Kept Secret the Findidng of Chemical Weapons in Iraq

HW:  1984: Read pp. 179-193


Friday, October 10, 2014

October 10, 2014

Learning Target:

I can make connections between current events and literature.

Activity 1: Begin this weekend's reading: Read pp. 136-179 for Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Activity 2: The United States of Secret's

Wednesday, October 8, 2014

October 9, 2014 1984 Part II chapters 1-2



What do you think of this? Is it accurate? Fair? What allusions does it rely on (allusions to current events, literature)? Would someone who had not read 1984 get this?

Find textual evidence to address the following:

Winston admits that as recently as two weeks prior to their meeting, he wanted to rape and murder Julia (120).  Why might he have such disturbingly violent thoughts about her?  Find textual evidence from last night's reading which address why he might dislike people like her and why that dislike would turn to such disturbingly violent thoughts. 
HW: Read and annotate pp.126-136 for tomorrow

Period 1
Maddie Brennan has to make up the in-class writing assessment and chapter 7-8 quiz
Joe Connor has to make up the in-class writing assessment
Blake Edwards has to make up the chapter 5-6 and 7-8 quizzes

Period 2
Quinton Hughes has to take chptr 7-8 quiz
Nikola has to take the in-class writing assessment

Period 3:
Michael Caplice has to take chptr 5-6 and 7-8 quizzes
Macy has to take the in-class essay assignment
Jay has to take the 7-8 quiz
David Beedle has to take the 7-8 quiz

October 8, 2014 1984 Part I In-class Writing Assessment

Learning Target: 

Through my writing, I can thoughtfully and articulately explore connections between literature and the world I live in.

Activity 1: Write 1984 Part I In-class Writing Assessment

HW: 

  • Read and annotate 117-126 in 1984
  • College Essay Revision Assignment due either tomorrow or Friday, whichever works best for you.

Friday, October 3, 2014

October 3, 2014

Learning Target: 

I can read and learn from college essay examples.

I can generate discussion questions and participate in a small group discussion about literature.

Activity 1: 

On one side of the notecard provided, please write a comment, observation or connection to last night's reading. Provide some context for your comment by referencing particular page numbers and briefly explaining/summarizing the part of the text you are commenting on.

On the pother side of the notecard, please write an inferential discussion question.

When finished, hand in your notecard and pick up a the college essay examples packet and begin reading the first essay.

Activity 2: 

Read the college essay example packet and comment on the strengths and weakness of each essay. 

For the first essay, read and annotate for things you feel are successful in each paragraph and the essay as a whole.  Think about what strategies she employs to make her piece work for her and her audience (the college admissions officer).

For the second essay, read and annotate, but in this case, I would like you to look for things that are problematic.  Describe those with some brief annotations beside each paragraph.

For the third essay, simply read it and then take a look at the critique on the back.

Homework: Read pages 81-104 for Tuesday.  (Group guidance on Monday)

By Wednesday, An annotated copy of your revised final draft.

Wednesday, October 1, 2014

October 1, 2014 1984 Chapters 5-6

Learning Targets:

I can make connections between literature and current events.

Activities:

Reading Quiz

North Korea, 1984, and Skiing?
North Korea, Big Brother, and Skiing? Discuss similarities between North Korea and Airstrip 1 in 1984.

Discuss chapters 5 and 6

Homework: None!

Tomorrow: 1984 In-class reading and discussion

Friday: College Essays returned, look at examples and discuss 1984