Thursday, March 23, 2017


Brownstock

AP prep unit Ralph Ellison 2010

Tenessee

Tenessee by Arrested Development (1992)
Write an essay in which you explain how Arrested Development uses language and images to convey moods and messages in Tennessee.
Lord I've really been real stressed
Down and out, losing ground
Although I am Black and proud
Problems got me pessimistic
Brothers and sisters keep messin up
Why does it have to be so damn tough
I don't know where I can go
To let these ghosts out of my skull
My grandma's passed, my brother's gone
I never at once felt so alone
I know you're supposed to be my steering wheel
Not just my spare tire (home)
But Lord I ask you (home)
To be my guiding force and truth (home)
For some strange reason it had to be (home)
He guided me to Tennessee (home)

Take me to another place
Take me to another land
Make me forget all that hurts me
Let me understand your plan

Lord it's obvious we got a relationship
Talking to each other every night and day
Although you're superior over me
We talk to each other in a friendship way
Then outta nowhere you tell me to break
Outta the country and into more country
Past Dyersburg into Ripley
Where the ghost of childhood haunts me
Walk the roads my forefathers walked
Climbed the trees my forefathers hung from
Ask those trees for all their wisdom
They tell me my ears are so young (home)
Go back to from whence you came (home)
My family tree my family name (home)
For some strange reason it had to be (home)
He guided me to Tennessee (home)

[Interlude: Aerle Taree]
Eshe, she went down to Holly Springs
Rasadon and Baba, they went down to Peachtree
Headliner, I challenge you to a game of horseshoes, a game of horseshoes

Now I see the importance of history
Why my people be in the mess that they be
Many journeys to freedom made in vain
By brothers on the corner playing ghetto games
I ask you Lord why you enlightened me
Without the enlightment of all my folks
He said cause I set myself on a quest for truth
And he was there to quench my thirst
But I am still thirsty
The Lord allowed me to drink some more
He said what I am searching for are
The answers to all which are in front of me
The ultimate truth started to get blurry
For some strange reason it had to be
It was all a dream about Tennessee

Headliner, I won the game of horseshoes
Now you owe me a watermelon
Let's go climb trees and skip over rocks
Do like they do below the border
Speech's hair
Don't it look like the roots of the tree that the ancestors were hung from

But that's okay, get it cause he's down to Earth

Explain the complexity of the tree motif in the video and the lyrics.


Friday, March 17, 2017

AP Exam Prep Unit

How would you describe the message and mood of this drawing and what elements of the work contribute to the message and mood?


Let's read the first MC section.

When do you thin it was written? Why?

What do you think the author's nationality is? Why?

What is the author's main point?

What characteristics of this text make it challenging for the typical reader?

What makes it challenging to read? Content? Syntax? Diction? Tone?




pedantic

or pedantical

[puh-dan-tik] 
 





adjective
1.
ostentatious in one's learning.
2.
overly concerned with minute details or formalisms, especially in teaching.


af·fec·ta·tion
[ˌafekˈtāSH(ə)n]

NOUN

  1. behavior, speech, or writing that is artificial and designed to impress:
    "the affectation of a man who measures every word for effect" · 
    synonyms: pretension · pretentiousness · affectedness · artificiality · posturing · 
per·spic·u·ous
[pərˈspikyo͞oəs]

ADJECTIVE


  1. formal
    (of an account or representation) clearly expressed and easily understood; lucid:
    "it provides simpler and more perspicuous explanations than its rivals"
    • (of a person) able to give an account or express an idea clearly.
cant1
[kant]

NOUN

  1. hypocritical and sanctimonious talk, typically of a moral, religious, or political nature:
    "the liberal case against all censorship is often cant"
    synonyms: hypocrisy · sanctimoniousness · sanctimony · pietism
  2. denoting a phrase or catchword temporarily current or in fashion:
    "they are misrepresented as, in the cant word of our day, uncaring"
VERB


  1. dated
    talk hypocritically and sanctimoniously about something:
    "if they'd stop canting about “honest work,” they might get somewhere"
  2. vulgar

    [vuhl-ger] 
     




    adjective
    1.
    characterized by ignorance of or lack of good breeding or taste:
    vulgar ostentation.
    2.
    indecent; obscene; lewd:
    a vulgar work; a vulgar gesture.
    3.
    crude; coarse; unrefined:
    a vulgar peasant.
    4.
    of, relating to, or constituting the ordinary people in a society:
    the vulgar masses.
    5.
    current; popular; common:
    a vulgar success; vulgar beliefs.
    6.
    spoken by, or being in the language spoken by, the people generally; vernacular:
    vulgar tongue.
tone = speaker’s attitude

POSITIVE TONE WORDS
NEUTRAL
(+, -,  or neutral)
NEGATIVE TONE WORDS
admiring
adoring
affectionate
appreciative
approving
bemused
benevolent
blithe
calm
casual
celebratory
cheerful
comforting
comic
compassionate
complimentary
conciliatory
confident
contented
delightful
earnest
ebullient
ecstatic
effusive
elated
empathetic
encouraging
euphoric
excited
exhilarated
expectant
facetious
fervent
flippant
forthright
friendly
funny
gleeful
gushy
happy


hilarious
hopeful
humorous
interested
introspective
jovial
joyful
laudatory
light
lively
mirthful
modest
nostalgic
optimistic
passionate
placid
playful
poignant
proud
reassuring
reflective
relaxed
respectful
reverent
romantic
sanguine
scholarly
self-assured sentimental
serene
silly
sprightly
straightforward
sympathetic
tender
tranquil
whimsical
wistful
worshipful
zealous

commanding
direct
impartial
indirect
meditative
objective
questioning
speculative
unambiguous
unconcerned
understated

abhorring
acerbic
ambiguous
ambivalent
angry
annoyed
antagonistic
anxious
apathetic
apprehensive
belligerent
bewildered
biting
bitter
blunt
bossy
cold
conceited
condescending
confused
contemptuous
curt
cynical
demanding
depressed
derisive
derogatory
desolate
despairing
desperate
detached
diabolic
disappointed
disliking
disrespectful
doubtful
embarrassed
enraged
evasive
fatalistic
fearful
forceful
foreboding
frantic
frightened
frustrated
furious
gloomy
grave
greedy
grim
harsh
haughty
holier-than-thou
hopeless
hostile
impatient
incredulous
indifferent
indignant
inflammatory
insecure
insolent
irreverent
lethargic
melancholy
mischievous
miserable
mocking
mournful
nervous
ominous
outraged
paranoid
pathetic
patronizing
pedantic
pensive
pessimistic
pretentious
psychotic
resigned
reticent
sarcastic
sardonic
scornful
self-deprecating
selfish
serious
severe
sinister
skeptical
sly
solemn
somber
stern
stolid
stressful
strident
suspicious
tense
threatening
tragic
uncertain
uneasy
unfriendly
unsympathetic
upset
violent
wry


mood = emotional effect that
the text creates for the audience

POSITIVE MOOD WORDS
NEGATIVE MOOD WORDS
amused
awed
bouncy
calm
cheerful
chipper
confident
contemplative
content
determined
dignified
dreamy
ecstatic
empowered
energetic
enlightened
enthralled
excited
exhilarated
flirty
giddy
grateful
harmonious
hopeful
hyper
idyllic
joyous

jubilant
liberating
light-hearted
loving
mellow
nostalgic
optimistic
passionate
peaceful
playful
pleased
refreshed
rejuvenated
relaxed
relieved
satiated
satisfied
sentimental
silly
surprised
sympathetic
thankful
thoughtful
touched
trustful
vivacious
warm
welcoming
aggravated
annoyed
anxious
apathetic
apprehensive
barren
brooding
cold
confining
confused
cranky
crushed
cynical
depressed
desolate
disappointed
discontented
distressed
drained
dreary
embarrassed
enraged
envious
exhausted
fatalistic
foreboding
frustrated
futile
gloomy
grumpy
haunting
heartbroken
hopeless
hostile
indifferent
infuriated

insidious
intimidated
irate
irritated
jealous
lethargic
lonely
melancholic
merciless
moody
morose
nauseated
nervous
nightmarish
numb
overwhelmed
painful
pensive
pessimistic
predatory
rejected
restless
scared
serious
sick
somber
stressed
suspenseful
tense
terrifying
threatening
uncomfortable
vengeful
violent
worried


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Wednesday, March 15, 2017

Hand in your AP synthesis packet (one per group). 

Make sure names and your class period are on it.

Prompt page
Sources
Source Analyses

Rest of class...
Although you can't use an outline on the in-class essay tomorrow, you should silently and independently work on a plan and structure for your essay  tomorrow.  

Tomorrow, each of you is responsible for bringing your own copy of your source materials to use and hand in with your essay.



Tomorrow: Don't be late! 
You will be given exactly 40 minutes to type;
When 40 minutes are up, you must stop typing, save, and print.

Period 1 in DC
Period 7 in Library B

Tuesday, March 14, 2017

For Tomorrow:  
Each person must hand in a digital copy to turnitin.com. (5 points)

Each group should 1) hand in one paper copy for me to grade, and 2) bring one extra copy per person to use on Thursday while writing their in-class essay. 

Prompt Page

Read the prompt page carefully.
Does the context provided in the 1st paragraph adequately and articulately prepare the reader to understand and respond to the prompt statement/question at the end of the 2nd paragraph?

Any edits/suggestions concerning the wordking of the prompt question/statement?

Are there any ways in which the formatting of the prompt page is not consistent with the 2014 example?

Sources...

Is bibliographic info properly formatted and in a text box?

Below the bibliographic box but before the source itself, is there an italicized statement providing information/context about the source?

Do they have at least six sources?

Do one (or two, but no more than two) have a visual component? - cartoon, graph, etc.

Read the sources: 1) Do they provide enough information for the reader to respond in an informed way to the prompt? 2) Do they provide a fair and balanced presentation of the issue?

Source Analyses: 

Do they begin by clearly identifying what "side" of the debate this source best supports (or is it neutral)?

Do they summarize the main point/perspective/thesis of the source?

Do they assess the credibility of the source and the factors contributing to that credibility? Do they discuss any biases or leanings that it has and that a mature reader should be aware of?


Do they identify and provide brief examples of the major pieces of information or sub-points of the major argument of the source?

Do they use a mixture of paraphrase and direct quote examples from the source to support their analysis?  

Is the prose in the analysis clean? Does the writing flow? Is it logically organized? Is it adequately developed?