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Clarity and Conciseness

Wesley
AP English - prd 5
15 Sept. 2016

Modern Day Lessons in a Puritan Society
The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne has been taught every year in AP classrooms for decades and decades. Nearly 150 years after the book was written, high schools still find it relevant in today’s society and applicable to teenage lives. One could argue that the book is too outdated and too far removed from modern day to have lessons that could relate to today’s high schoolers. However, the universal lessons of guilt, good versus evil, and gender roles preached in The Scarlet Letter have had influence on readers for centuries, and continue to be influential today.
Hester Prynne, a young woman in the New England Puritan town, is publicly shamed after becoming pregnant with the child of a man who is not her husband. Since the town knows Hester’s sin, she is forced to deal with the guilt that comes with her sin, because there is no hiding a pregnancy. Since Hester refuses to admit who the father is, she must hold all the guilt herself, while the father, Reverend Dimmsdale, must suffer in silence. After enduring an agonizing three hours of shame on the town scaffold, Hester accepts that she will forever be shamed for what she has done, “In a moment, however, wisely judging that one token of her shame would but poorly serve to hide another, she took the baby on her arm, and, with a burning blush, and yet a haughty smile, and a glance that would not be abashed, looked around at her townspeople and neighbours. On the breast of her gown, in fine red cloth, surrounded with an elaborate embroidery and fantastic flourishes of gold thread, appeared the letter A” (Hawthorne 37). Hester deals with the public humiliation of wearing an A for “adultress” and standing on a scaffold in front of the town by later, staying strong, continuing to love her daughter, Pearl, and returning love to the community, despite their treatment of her. Hester’s way of productively handling her guilt and turning it to love instead of anger could help high schoolers today lean how to effectively overcome guilt, and not wallow in it.
Hester’s heroic approach to repenting her sin, is just one of the many ways a person can deal with guilt. Reverend Dimmsdale, the father to Pearl, is under different cirumstances in regard to admitting his sin. Dimmsdale is the beloved reverend, apotheosized by the whole town. He knows that if he were to reveal his secret, the town would lose hope in religion and God. He begins to struggle with the immense guilt that he carries, “Poor, miserable man! what right had infirmity like his to burden itself with crime? Crime is for the iron-nerved, who have their choice either to endure it, or, if it press too hard, to exert their fierce and savage strength for a good purpose, and fling it off at once! (Hawthorne 195)” His immense suffering demonstrates what kind of stress can be put on a person who does not admit their sins, and are forced to deal with the guilt in silent suffering. Dimmsdale demonstrates how even holy, pious men like himself are capable of committing a sin as unholy as Hester’s. The juxtaposition between Hester’s and Dimmsdale’s experience in having guilt from the same sin emphasises the two different ways people tend to face guilt: admit it or hide from it. There is no right or wrong answer, but the The Scarlet Letter plays out the consequences of each; be publicly shamed or die of guilt, like the Reverend at the end of the book.
According to The Scarlet Letter, good will always triumph over evil eventually. For the entirety of the book, Dimmsdale feels ill because his guilt is destroying him. Chillingworth, the “physician” and Hester’s estranged husband, takes Dimmsdale’s health into his own hands and studies him day after day. Chillingworth becomes devil-like in his obsession with finding out the truth, “In a word, old Roger Chillingworth was a striking evidence of man’s faculty of transforming himself into a Devil, if he will only, for a reasonable space of time, undertake the Devil’s office. This unhappy person had effected such a transformation by devoting himself, for seven years, to the constant analysis of a heart a full of torture, and deriving his enjoyment thence, and adding fuel to those fiery tortures which he analyzed and gloated over.” (Hawthorne 134).  However, Chillingworth’s real purpose is to expose the truth from Dimmsdale that he is the father is Pearl, the child born out of sin. After the death of Dimmsdale, immediately after he admits his sin to the town, Chillingworth experiences a change in self. “Nothing was more remarkable than the change which took place, almost immediately after Mr. Dimmsdale’s death, in the appearance and demeanor of the old man we know as Roger Chillingworth. All his strength and and energy- all his vital and intellectual force seemed at once to desert him; in so much that he positively withered up, shriveled away, and almost vanished from mortal sight, like an uprooted week that lies wilting in the sun” (Hawthorne 154). Chillingworth’s change demonstrates how good and evil deal with sin. The good, Dimmsdale, confesses their sins before he passes. Once Dimmsdale passes, Chillingworth loses all the power that he held over him while he was still alive. Ultimately, good triumphed evil, which is a lesson important to learn in high school, college, and life in general.
The Scarlet Letter brings up another important issue that, unfortunately, continues to be relevant today. Puritan women, especially in the 1600s, were oppressed and not given nearly as many rights as men. In the Puritan town, Hester becomes a symbol of all sin and all things evil, “Throughout them all, giving up her individuality, she would become the general symbol at which the preacher and moralist might point, and in which they might vivify and embody their images of woman's frailty and sinful passion. Thus the young and pure would be taught to look at her, with the scarlet letter flaming on her breast,—at her, the child of honorable parents,—at her, the mother of a babe, that would hereafter be a woman, —at her, who had once been innocent, —as the figure, the body, the reality of sin. And over her grave, the infamy that she must carry thither would be her only monument” (Hawthorne 67) .  Some call The Scarlet Letter a feminist novel ahead of it’s time because during the time period in which it was written and when the story takes place, it was extremely common for women to be discriminated against and considered less important than men in society, yet Hawthorne’s feminist views allows Hester to be seen as a strong woman protagonist, while Dimmsdale suffers. A strong woman protagonist is inspiring to young women everywhere.
The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne has valuable lessons applicable to not only high schoolers, but all people in general. Guilt has the power to destroy us if not dealt with, good always conquers evil, and women have been oppressed for ages.


English – prd 6
Mr. Wesley
9/27/16
Hawthorne’s Feminism
            The Oxford Dictionary defines Feminism as "the advocacy of women's rights on the grounds of political, social, and economic equality to men."  According to this definition, The Scarlet Letter, by Nathaniel Hawthorne, does not appear to be a traditional feminist book due to its lack of direct avocation of women's rights.  However, it indirectly exemplifies feminism through its assertions that the character of women is equal to that of men.  One quality in the novel that depicts feminism is Hester's strength.  Hester’s ability to handle the ignominy of the scarlet letter for years and still care for a child highlights a strength that surpasses even that of the men in The Scarlet Letter.  Hawthorne's novel also displays Hester's independence and ability to thrive on her own without the support of a man.  Despite Hester’s lack of a husband and the difficulties she faced in work due to her sin, she managed to survive and care for herself and Pearl through her skill as a seamstress.  Finally, The Scarlet Letter epitomizes feminism through Hester’s courage and determination in the face of overwhelming odds.  Hester could have run from the shame and struggles that faced her in New England, but she chooses to not only stay, but also to continue helping others through charity.  Ultimately, Nathaniel Hawthorne’s book The Scarlet Letter is feminist due to its implication that Hester has strength, the ability to survive and bravery equal to any male.

            The first indication of The Scarlet Letter’s feminist nature is in its display of Hester’s strength.  When Hawthorne wrote this book, women were almost always displayed as weaker than men, but Hester appears to possess strength greater than anyone else in the town.  The first indication of Hester’s incredible toughness is at the very start of the book, when after leaving the prison, Hester looked at the townspeople with a “haughty smile, and a glance that would not be abashed” (37).  In Puritan New England, religion was everything, and committing adultery was one of the worst sins one could commit.  Yet Hester has the mental fortitude to stand up straight and look unabashedly at the townspeople.  Moreover, she decides to beautifully embroider the Scarlet Letter onto her dress, suggesting that she is making “a pride out of what they, worthy gentleman, meant for a punishment” (38).  This defiant attitude displays the enormous strength of character Hester Prynne possesses.   The Scarlet Letter also utilizes Dimmesdale to highlight Hester’s vigor.  Throughout the book, Dimmesdale struggles to reveal his sin to the town.  He cannot bring himself to confess until he is about to die, and does not need to worry about the shame and the consequences.  Dimmesdale is one of the most holy and  revered men in the town, but his inability to deal with the dishonor that Hester dealt with for years indicates that the strength in women can often surpass that of men, establishing The Scarlet Letter as a feminist novel. 

Hester Prynne’s independence and self-preservation is another aspect of Hawthorne’s book that exemplifies feminism.  In New England, Hester Prynne has no man  to support her and after receiving the scarlet letter, she is utterly alone in raising her child.  Despite this fact, she manages to thrive in the colony due to her prowess at producing “the finer productions”(56) of clothes that were needed for ceremonies and religious leaders.  Her skill allows her to survive and support herself without the help of a man, further proving her equality to men.  Hester’s independence also illustrates feministic qualities.  Hester refuses to abide by the laws of her time when “the very laws that condemned her… had held her up”(54).  Through refusing to allow these laws to bring her down, she illustrates her independence from the men that seek to shame her.  Her independence insinuates that all women have the capability to be independent from men, further reinforcing a feminist tone in The Scarlet Letter.

            The courage and determination displayed by Hester establishes this book as feminist.  The first instance of courage depicted in The Scarlet Letter is when Hester refuses to leave New England.  She knew that the scarlet letter would cause making a living and caring for her daughter to be incredibly difficult.  Nonetheless, instead of running from her difficulties, she displays the bravery and willpower to stay and face the hardships head on.  Moreover, she helps out others through charity even though it is trying enough to fend for herself.  Another instance of Hester’s courage is highlighted when Dimmesdale says to her “advise me what to do” and she responds that they could venture to “our native land, whether in some remote rural village or in vast London, -- or, surely, in Germany, in France”(135).  Their discussion illustrates the courage Hester has to leave the town she has lived in for years and also highlights the dedication she has to saving Dimmesdale’s life from Roger Chillingworth.  Hester’s immense valor is further illustrated when Dimmesdale says that he does not have “the strength or courage left [in] me to venture into the wide, strange, difficult world, alone”(136).  The fact that Dimmesdale cannot bring himself to flee the town and brave the rest of the world only amplifies the bravery that Hester has because she is willing to flee.      

When Hawthorne wrote his narrative in 1850, the “first wave” of feminism had just begun.  In this period, women began seeking rights and attempting to abolish gender double standards, but its ideals were still scoffed at by a majority of men and even women in society.  Despite this fact, The Scarlet Letter, by Nathaniel Hawthorne subtly advocates feminism due to its declaration that women are equal to men.  Hawthorne illustrates this equality by depicting Hester’s mental toughness in the face of her ignominy.  He also displays it through the bravery and resolve of Hester to overcome the immense challenges that face her and her newborn daughter.  Finally, he utilizes Hester’s independent spirit and survival instinct to depict that women are equal to men.  Ultimately, Hawthorne’s book The Scarlet Letter is a feminist novel because it depicts men and women as equals and implies that women have every right to the freedoms that men enjoy.

Wesley
III AP - 5
4 October 2016

Spreading Her Wings of Liveliness

            According to Ann Woodlief of Virginia Commonwealth University, the Puritans came to America to create “a ‘city on the hill’ that would show the rest of Europe…just what a religious community could be” (Woodlief 1). They believed that England’s religion was “corrupted” (Woodlief 1) and took on the responsibility of purifying the Anglican Church. In The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne, a woman living in Puritan New England, Hester Prynne, must wear a scarlet letter on her bosom to identify her as an adulteress. Her daughter Pearl is singled out by the Puritans as well because she is the living representation of her mother’s sin. Pearl appears to be imp-like rather than human because of her abnormal tendencies, causing additional ridicule from the Puritans. In The Scarlet Letter, Hawthorne emphasizes the harsh practices of seventeenth century Puritanism by juxtaposing the religion’s beliefs with the free spirit of the character Pearl. Furthermore, the author’s portrayal of Pearl in conjunction with nature expresses Romantic thinking, a progressive idea for the time period of the novel.
            In the novel, Hawthorne includes images that highlight the contrast between Puritanism and Pearl. Boston has a procession for a newly elected governor, and Pearl wanders away from her mother, “playing at her own will about the market-place [and]… ma[king] the sombre crowd cheerful by her erratic and glistening ray” (Hawthorne 167). Hawthorne’s description of the child depicts the image of Pearl shining light on the crowd of Puritans, as if she is the sun, shedding happiness onto this gloomy bunch. The author reveals the sternness that defines Puritans by comparing them to Pearl’s youthful and exuberant personality. As Pearl gallops throughout the town, she runs through a group of sailors, “as if a flake of the sea-foam had taken the shape of a little maid, and were gifted with a soul of sea-fire” (Hawthorne 168). The vivid simile crafted by Hawthorne describes the indefatigable energy that flows through the young girl by comparing her to the intensity of the ocean. In addition, Hawthorne’s reference to nature while illustrating Pearl’s character refers to Romantic thinking, in which the natural world is very significant.  The author’s suggestion of Romanticism expresses his personal beliefs about philosophy because of the repetition of comparisons between Pearl and nature. For example, Hawthorne indicates that “Pearl resembled the brook, inasmuch as the current of her life gushed from a well-spring as mysterious” (Hawthorne 128). In the detailed metaphor, Pearl’s relation to the stream reinforces Romanticism because it pertains to nature, an inspiration to Romantics. Hawthorne’s use of natural imagery to describe Pearl reveals the author’s admiration for Romanticism.
Although Hawthorne often compares the strange little girl to nonliving parts of nature, he later develops a meaningful symbol involving a living creature: the bird. Throughout The Scarlet Letter, Pearl is compared to this winged creature, as she never stays by her mother’s side and would rather flutter around. Her restlessness is evident during an exciting holiday in the New England town. Pearl, with a bubbly spirit, “flit[s] with a bird-like movement” (Hawthorne 156) unlike well-behaved children who stay at their mothers’ sides. A bird can represent freedom, as it has the ability to fly away and choose its own path, similar to how Pearl has an open-mind despite the influence of the Puritans. Additionally, the restless child expressing her curiosity represents the author’s dislike for Puritanism and his exploration of Romantic ideas. Moreover, at the procession for the town’s new governor, Pearl spreads her cheerfulness like “a bird of bright plumage illuminates a whole tree of dusky foliage” (Hawthorne 167). Similar to a bird visiting a tree, Pearl spreads her wings of liveliness although her surroundings are drab. Beyond the symbolic meaning of a bird, Hawthorne develops comparisons pertaining to nature and further implies Romantic thinking. In addition, Pearl is equated to a hummingbird, an unstoppable creature because of its rapidly moving wings. The seamen who Pearl runs into during the ceremony find “it as impossible to touch her as to catch a humming-bird” (Hawthorne 168), reinforcing the girl’s free spirit because Hawthorne compares her to a bird that cannot be captured and therefore follows its own desires. Likewise, Pearl’s free thinking cannot be dampened despite any criticism from the Puritans. The simile also implies Romanticism because it suggests freedom of thought and nature, two values of the eighteenth century movement.
Pearl clearly does not conform to the people around her, and it is common for people to judge those who are different. Even when the citizens in the market-place smile at her, they are “none the less inclined to pronounce the child a demon offspring” (Hawthorne 167). Hawthorne highlights that the Puritans are hypercritical by demonstrating the cruel judgment of Pearl practiced by the group. Each instance of the child crossing paths with the Puritans creates a reaction from the parishioners that sheds light onto the intensity at which they followed the idea of purity. Pearl serves as an example of someone who was deemed an outcast by the seventeenth century New Englanders, helping Hawthorne illustrate the Puritan culture as adverse. Furthermore, Pearl’s mother, Hester, is constantly in a state of ignominy because of her act of adultery, isolating the two of them from the rest of their community. In fact, the Puritan youth “had got a vague idea of something outlandish, unearthly…in the mother and child” (Hawthorne 64). The Puritans therefore judged the two outcasts, and verbally denounced them. Hawthorne’s inclusion of the Puritans’ judgments portrays the religious group as unreasonably harsh, contributing to the author’s disapproval of Puritanism. Moreover, attacks on outcasts can affect the way someone views oneself. Hester internalizes the mockery and dresses in simple gray, which differs vastly from the attire of her daughter. “It would have been impossible to guess that this bright and sunny apparition [Pearl] owed its existence to the shape of gloomy gray [Hester]” (Hawthorne 156). The difference in appearance of the two emphasizes how Puritanism can make one have a poor self-image; however, it also enforces Pearl’s irrepressible free thinking. Hawthorne’s endorsement of Romanticism is evident because of his selection of vocabulary. He uses the word “gloomy” to describe Hester because the Puritans’ harshness has made the woman feel ashamed for committing adultery. The author criticizes the religion by displaying how upset Puritanism has made Hester, and his description of Pearl as “sunny” expresses his approval of Romantic ideas because of the natural reference to the sun. Pearl is a key character for the depiction of Hawthorne’s message because of how she contrasts with Puritanism and the guilt of Hester.

Clearly, a Romantic thinker, like Hawthorne, has a very deep connection with nature. Marcel Isnard writes, the “awareness in the presence of an active principle in nature…best characterizes the Romantic conception [of the natural world]” (Isnard 187). As Hawthorne compares Pearl with nature and contrasts Pearl with the Puritans, he hints at the Romantic era of free thinking. Even early on in the novel, Pearl sees some rosebushes and begins “to cry for a red rose and would not be pacified” (Hawthorne 73), showing Pearl’s connectedness with nature and alluding to the author’s questioning of Puritanism. In The Scarlet Letter, Pearl tends to do things that are unlike the other Puritan children, and vastly different from the older devout parishioners. Her ways serve to question the beliefs of these individuals, although she embodies a sin in the eyes of the townspeople. Overall, Hawthorne’s creation of Pearl allows him to express his Romantic ideas and contrast them with the harshness of Puritanism.



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