Then write about whether or not you would recommend it and why.
Another College Essay Example: Read Katherine Glass college essay (provided in its entirety at the bottom of today's post)
Finish your crappy first draft
HW tonight: Handwrite a more focused first draft. Bring it to class tomorrow.
Tomorrow we will be in the DC (go straight there) working on your
Katherine
Glass '18
Dana Hall School, MA
Arts and Sciences
Dana Hall School, MA
Arts and Sciences
A
portrait of Julia Child leans precariously on my bedside table competing for
space with sticky notes, pennies, and a plastic alarm clock. Julia has been my
role model ever since I spent an hour at the Smithsonian American History
Museum watching cooking show after cooking show. As she dropped eggs, burnt
soufflés, and prepared a whole pig, she never took herself too seriously and
with her goofy smile and accompanying laugh. And yet, she was as successful in
her field as anyone could ever be. Her passion completely guided her career.
She taught me that it does not matter what I choose to do, it only matters that
I do it with my whole self; zealously and humorously.
Unlike
Julia, I do not aspire to be a chef. Brownies out of a box may just be the
highlight of my baking career. Something I have been passionate about for my
whole life, however, is teaching. The first traces of my excitement came from a
summer camp that I founded when I was seven years old. Motivated by too many
imperfect summer camp experiences, I established my ideal summer camp, one in
which campers could choose their activities, from banana split tutorials to
wacky hat-making. So that year it began, with seven five-year-old campers in my
backyard. For six consecutive years, I ran my summer camp, each year tweaking
and improving from the years before.
Chebeague
Island, Maine, established a preschool in the spring of 2012, run out of a
trailer by a recent college graduate. I volunteered as an intern. For three
months, I helped organize for the summer and the following year. I took out the
trash, cleaned, and sorted toys, all while studying how to incorporate
educational material into preschool activities. I wrote curriculum and
researched preschool regulations to ensure that we were in compliance. We
created a safe classroom, an academic plan for the upcoming year, and a balance
between learning and playing in the classroom. By the end of the summer the
intern became the co-director of the summer preschool program.
This
past June, I returned to the trailer to find the space and program in complete
disarray. Since the previous summer, the preschool had seen two new directors
and the latest was spread thin, juggling maintenance, finances and curriculum
planning. My progress had not endured. After sulking for a week, I decided I
was better suited to envelop Julia’s mentality. What did she do when she
flipped a burger onto the ground? She smiled, laughed at the camera, picked it
up, reshaped it a little, and kept right on going. So that’s what I did. I
brought in a group of friends to clean and organize the trailer. I initiated a
“lobster-roll” fundraiser, and Island lobstermen donated lobsters while their
wives came together to pick meat from the shells. It was wildly successful and
thrived on the community’s spirit. Then I worked to reinstate some sort of
educational value into the summer program. We danced to Spanish and Ghanaian
music, crafted wacky hats, and read books about the lobstering industry, an
aspect of their community that is so significant.
My
past two summers have been exhausting and all too frequently frustrating but
ultimately the Chebeague Island Preschool, along with many other teaching
experiences, has exposed me to the ground level of education policy in the
United States. After this past summer my goal is to become a future U.S.
Secretary of Education.
So my
portrait of Julia is by my bedside to remind me. Remind me that throughout the
tedium of my extremely busy life there is something that I am passionate about.
To remind me that personality and humor are essential to success. And remind me
that the sort of passion I need to succeed is not the type that will let me
give in to small setbacks along the way.
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