8/30  Tuesday DC Prd 1: DC West Prd 2: DC East For tomorrow: Finish 1st  typed draft of college essay and bring two copies (one for you’re your self-edit and one for someone else to provide feedback on) In reading packet from last week, read Zinsser chapters on Simplicity and Clutter for tomorrow

8/31  Wed  Late Start Day 1st typed draft due (5 points formative or zero based on visual check) Discussion of Zinsser and self-edit & peer review -Where can you explode a moment?  What concrete details might you add to bring it to life? What verbs might be changed? Where is there clutter? HW: Type 2nd draft for Friday/It should include a paragraph which describes the types of changes you made and why

9/1  Thursday Group Guidance All students will report the Library lower level main floor. Students will scan into the Library with their ID when they arrive. Thank you!

9/2  Friday 2nd draft and progress paragraph due Peer review of 2nd draft HW: Revise this 2nd draft, explain changes in a paragraph, and hand it in to me by Tuesday, 9/6.  (5 points) Exercise in Descriptive Writing: Dullest Day of The Summer